Awaken Into a New World

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You open your eyes to incredibly bright sunlight shining in your face. You stand and stretch, yawning. And then you take a look around.
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You open your eyes to incredibly bright sunlight shining in your face. You stand and stretch, yawning, then you take a look around.
You’re in a forest that you dimly recognize as being north of Ecruteak City, Johto. You silently thank the Unown for putting you someplace near where you need to be.
You’re in a forest that you dimly recognize as being north of Ecruteak City, Johto. You silently thank the Unown for putting you someplace near where you need to be.
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''Of course, the North Wind is also aiding me. Thank you, North Wind.'' You think cheerfully.
''Of course, the North Wind is also aiding me. Thank you, North Wind.'' You think cheerfully.
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After a few minutes of running through the trees and over rocks and off cliffs (to land safely, and gracefully, at the bottom. Who knew that your skinny legs could take such an impact so well? Then again, it was probably the Wind) you slow down when you reach the edge of the forest. When you reached the last shadows cast by the leaves, you stopped.
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After a few minutes of running through the trees and over rocks and off cliffs (to land safely, and gracefully, at the bottom. Who knew that your skinny legs could take such an impact so well? Then again, it was probably the Wind) you slow down when you reach the edge of the forest. When you reached the last shadows cast by the leaves, you stop.
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Before you lay Ecruteak City, but your eyes were glued to the scorched, blackened tower just in front of you. The other tower, tall and proud, lay in your peripheral vision.
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Before you lies Ecruteak City, but your eyes are glued to the scorched, blackened tower just in front of you. You see the other tower, tall and proud, in your peripheral vision.
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A part of you wanted to explore the tower where legend said you had your beginnings, but the other part was concerned that if you stop, you’ll miss whatever is happening at the gorgeous lake.
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A part of you wants to explore the tower where legend said you had your beginnings, but the other part was concerned that if you stop, you’ll miss whatever is happening at that gorgeous lake.
What should you do?
What should you do?

Revision as of 00:46, 3 December 2011

You open your eyes to incredibly bright sunlight shining in your face. You stand and stretch, yawning, then you take a look around.

You’re in a forest that you dimly recognize as being north of Ecruteak City, Johto. You silently thank the Unown for putting you someplace near where you need to be.

You think for several seconds and identify the waterfall being somewhere near Cherrygrove City. Just north of it, you believe.

You turn to face south, nod your head decisively, then run forwards. Trees pass by as you fly past them. You silently admire the grace that you run with and the speed at which you run at. At this rate, it’ll be next to no time before you get this show on the road.

Of course, the North Wind is also aiding me. Thank you, North Wind. You think cheerfully.

After a few minutes of running through the trees and over rocks and off cliffs (to land safely, and gracefully, at the bottom. Who knew that your skinny legs could take such an impact so well? Then again, it was probably the Wind) you slow down when you reach the edge of the forest. When you reached the last shadows cast by the leaves, you stop.

Before you lies Ecruteak City, but your eyes are glued to the scorched, blackened tower just in front of you. You see the other tower, tall and proud, in your peripheral vision.

A part of you wants to explore the tower where legend said you had your beginnings, but the other part was concerned that if you stop, you’ll miss whatever is happening at that gorgeous lake.

What should you do?

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