User talk:Creat0r
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Since you are ignoring my requests and continuing to post non-grammatical pages with choices that are not 2nd person, I STRONGLY suggest you create your own story. Your contributions to mine are not acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:23, 3 August 2013 (UTC) | Since you are ignoring my requests and continuing to post non-grammatical pages with choices that are not 2nd person, I STRONGLY suggest you create your own story. Your contributions to mine are not acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:23, 3 August 2013 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Just to give you an example: | ||
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| + | "Under you", the invisible dragon replied. "You don't want anyone seeing a real flying dragon with you riding it, do you?" | ||
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| + | "Good point", you nod. | ||
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| + | You land later in front of a big cave. You walk inside and see.. | ||
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| + | *[[A big group of horny dragons]] | ||
| + | *[[Treasure]] | ||
| + | *[[A spring and small lake]] | ||
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| + | Your character cannot decide what he's going to see. These choices are not acceptable. The commas in the dialogue are on the wrong side of the quote marks. The ellipsis at the end of ''You walk inside and see'' is missing a period. The dragon ''replied'', which is past tense, and this story is written in present tense. | ||
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| + | Since I don't want to have to review and edit everything you post, I would prefer if you find some other story to post in or create your own. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:48, 5 August 2013 (UTC) | ||
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If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. Use apostrophes when they're needed and remember that I is capitalized.
Also, all choices must be choices your character can make, never choices of what someone else can do with or for your character.
And pay attention to the location in the status bar. --Platypus 15:07, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Since you are ignoring my requests and continuing to post non-grammatical pages with choices that are not 2nd person, I STRONGLY suggest you create your own story. Your contributions to mine are not acceptable. --Platypus 19:23, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Just to give you an example:
"Under you", the invisible dragon replied. "You don't want anyone seeing a real flying dragon with you riding it, do you?"
"Good point", you nod.
You land later in front of a big cave. You walk inside and see..
Your character cannot decide what he's going to see. These choices are not acceptable. The commas in the dialogue are on the wrong side of the quote marks. The ellipsis at the end of You walk inside and see is missing a period. The dragon replied, which is past tense, and this story is written in present tense.
Since I don't want to have to review and edit everything you post, I would prefer if you find some other story to post in or create your own. --Platypus 11:48, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
