Walk towards your family

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You sit down in the front of the hall with your family. A solemn look in your parents faces the funeral sermon had begun.
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Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd.
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The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.
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Looking back rows of people dressed in black were here. The person who died must have been important to have this many people coming.
 
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1 hour later...... The funeral had ended and you walk out.
 
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Your father stops and looks at you. "You two will follow Ian here we still have some business to take care of." 
 
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Ian was the same man who drove you here. He starts motioning you to follow him deeper in the mansion.
 
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It really was a beautiful place rich and decorated beautifully with artworks, murals and statues from a Gothic time period.
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(After the Funeral)
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The deeper you go the more impressed you become. Some halls full of artworks, while some dingy like dungeon chambers to areas so spacious it almost felt like being in an opera hall. You climb the stairs and deeper inside finally stopping in a long hallway which had a dozen rooms.
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. You'll have another guest keep you company breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio. You wave goodbye to your sister as she walks in greeted by a female voice. You only have a moment to see who's inside.
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Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of."
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He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.
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The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.
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You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway.
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio."
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Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.
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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.
You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.
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It was a spectacular room 3 beds a spacious bathroom, closet, and a spacious balcony outside to look at the inner mansion.
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It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room.
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You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.
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The 2 other boys looked like they were about to leave right before you entered. They look at you the red haired boy asked "you want to come with us and look around?"
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The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"  
(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))
(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))

Current revision as of 11:20, 21 October 2011

Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd. The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.


(After the Funeral)

Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of." He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.

The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.

You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway. "This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio." Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.


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A few rooms down the same hallway was your room. Ian said the same speech and walked away. You enter the room. Like your sister you had roommates a blond haired boy and a red haired freckled one stared at you.


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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.

It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room. You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.

The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"

(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))

Go with them

Stay and go to sleep

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