Fast Forward to the funeral

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"They say he died overdrinking, crazy old man" the fellows laughed, and another spoke
"They say he died overdrinking, crazy old man" the fellows laughed, and another spoke
"No, no he was.." they paused as you approached them.  
"No, no he was.." they paused as you approached them.  
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The anger rising in you was about to explode on these disrespectful bastards.
The anger rising in you was about to explode on these disrespectful bastards.
But a voice suddenly spoke behind, and you recognize Mieko your cousin
But a voice suddenly spoke behind, and you recognize Mieko your cousin
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"Guys stop joking around, and cousin come here for a second."
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"Guys stop joking around, and you come here for a second."
   
   
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She grabbed you pulling you away from the other group, disarming the situation.
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She pulled you away from the other group, disarming the situation.
"Ignore them and don't cause a scene its not good for a funeral."
"Ignore them and don't cause a scene its not good for a funeral."
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Thinking a bit clearly now she was right. The day before you had arrived at the mansion for the
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Thinking a bit clearly now she was right. The day before you had arrived for the funeral of your uncle, and you expected a more somber crowd
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funeral of your uncle, and you expected a more somber crowd
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however everyone was clearly acting like it was a party.
however everyone was clearly acting like it was a party.

Current revision as of 23:13, 24 February 2012

"They say he died overdrinking, crazy old man" the fellows laughed, and another spoke "No, no he was.." they paused as you approached them.

The anger rising in you was about to explode on these disrespectful bastards. But a voice suddenly spoke behind, and you recognize Mieko your cousin "Guys stop joking around, and you come here for a second."

She pulled you away from the other group, disarming the situation. "Ignore them and don't cause a scene its not good for a funeral."

Thinking a bit clearly now she was right. The day before you had arrived for the funeral of your uncle, and you expected a more somber crowd however everyone was clearly acting like it was a party.

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