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You crawl along the ground in what you can only assume is a southern direction. | You crawl along the ground in what you can only assume is a southern direction. | ||
| - | "Oh, shit!" | + | "Oh, shit!" A mouse runs across your hand. You shudder but keep moving. "Ah!" Another mouse brushes your leg. |
| - | "Oh, oh, no no!" | + | |
| + | "Oh, oh, no no!" Another mouse has crawled into your old man slacks where they got torn up falling into that pool. | ||
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"Out, out!" you screech and bat at the lump under your trousers with your open hand. It squeaks and bites! It bites again! | "Out, out!" you screech and bat at the lump under your trousers with your open hand. It squeaks and bites! It bites again! | ||
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TRY AGAIN | TRY AGAIN | ||
| + | [[Category:The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]] | ||
| + | [[Category:Endings]] | ||
Current revision as of 19:56, 22 February 2010
You crawl along the ground in what you can only assume is a southern direction. "Oh, shit!" A mouse runs across your hand. You shudder but keep moving. "Ah!" Another mouse brushes your leg.
"Oh, oh, no no!" Another mouse has crawled into your old man slacks where they got torn up falling into that pool.
"Out, out!" you screech and bat at the lump under your trousers with your open hand. It squeaks and bites! It bites again!
"OW ow OW!" you stand abruptly to let gravity get this little pest out of your pants. YOU HIT YOUR HEAD!
............in the darkness......as you lay unconscious..........the mice make a meal out of you................
TRY AGAIN
