-"Oh, yes please."
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| - | + | "Oh, yes please" Loli answered with enthousiasm. | |
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| - | When they were inside the bathroom, Loli saw a big bath | + | "Okay then, follow me." |
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| - | + | The nurse walked towards a door and Loli followed her. When they were inside the bathroom, Loli saw a big bath. She took off her dirty, teared and old clothes and got inside the bath. The nurse washed her and from the dirty and black person that she was, she became clean again. | |
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| + | When Loli got out of the bath she was dried with a towel. The nurse put her in a new and clean pajamas. It was a pretty blue pajamas. Then the nurse brushed Loli's hair, which wasn't black anymore; now it was beautiful long, straight and gold blonde hair. Then Loli had to brush her teeth, which were black and dirty and after she finished brushing them for a half hour, they were as white as pearls. Then she looked at herself in a mirror. She was surprised because that was the first time she saw herself and she couldn't believe she was so thin and that she was so clean after years and years of being dirty. | ||
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| + | "Wow" Loli said "I didn’t knew I was so beautiful, the only problem is that my bang is so long that I can't even see." | ||
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| + | "No problem, I'll cut it for you, and it will be better if I cut your hair too, it's really too long" the nurse said and got scissors out of nowhere. | ||
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[[-Stay quiet and let her cut your hair.]] | [[-Stay quiet and let her cut your hair.]] | ||
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Current revision as of 15:55, 17 January 2010
"Oh, yes please" Loli answered with enthousiasm.
"Okay then, follow me."
The nurse walked towards a door and Loli followed her. When they were inside the bathroom, Loli saw a big bath. She took off her dirty, teared and old clothes and got inside the bath. The nurse washed her and from the dirty and black person that she was, she became clean again.
When Loli got out of the bath she was dried with a towel. The nurse put her in a new and clean pajamas. It was a pretty blue pajamas. Then the nurse brushed Loli's hair, which wasn't black anymore; now it was beautiful long, straight and gold blonde hair. Then Loli had to brush her teeth, which were black and dirty and after she finished brushing them for a half hour, they were as white as pearls. Then she looked at herself in a mirror. She was surprised because that was the first time she saw herself and she couldn't believe she was so thin and that she was so clean after years and years of being dirty.
"Wow" Loli said "I didn’t knew I was so beautiful, the only problem is that my bang is so long that I can't even see."
"No problem, I'll cut it for you, and it will be better if I cut your hair too, it's really too long" the nurse said and got scissors out of nowhere.
What does Loli do?:
