Afraid of the Dark

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You were sitting in a car, while outside the trees surrounded you on all sides.
 
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The driver was a pale tall man who wore the formal driver attire, and next to you your sister who was trying to get her cellphone to work.
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"Stupid thing no signals means were in the middle of nowhere" She sighed then looked out her window.
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Both of you were supposed to go back to your home for Christmas break but instead..... to some vague destination where your parents were.
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"Can you please turn on the radio?" your sister was trying to talk to the driver. Without saying a word and with a motion of his hands he turned it on.
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The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as the highway as the road continued down deeper in the forest.  
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However.... Ksshhhhh Kshhhhh No stations either u guessed, since there was no cellphone signals sure as hell no radio signals.
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You truly were in the middle of nowhere.......
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(15 mins ago)
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The cars were passing by one.... two... a truck then a van... You sit silently looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
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Here you are traveling with your sister to a relatives house excused from the academy for a week.
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It was nice being excused from school but for what? And where were you going...
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Turning the knob again the driver fruitlessly wasn't able to find  anything but static.
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The car slowed down, and you look in front there was still the highway and then around and realize you stopped at side of the road on a deeply wooded part trees tall on both sides of the road. The driver suddenly getting out crossing the street towards an old wooden gate barring a dusty road into the forest.
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But then a station with a woman singing mournfully in French comes on but her voice chopped up. It was a poor reception but still it was something.
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(Back to the present)
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It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road this place was truly private.
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Revision as of 07:59, 8 January 2010

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The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as the highway as the road continued down deeper in the forest.

(15 mins ago) The cars were passing by one.... two... a truck then a van... You sit silently looking outside while listening to your mp3 player. Here you are traveling with your sister to a relatives house excused from the academy for a week. It was nice being excused from school but for what? And where were you going...

The car slowed down, and you look in front there was still the highway and then around and realize you stopped at side of the road on a deeply wooded part trees tall on both sides of the road. The driver suddenly getting out crossing the street towards an old wooden gate barring a dusty road into the forest.

(Back to the present) It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road this place was truly private.

You:

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