Marcus, a bold fighter

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"I am Marcus, a bold fighter, may I gain entrance to Metropolis?" you reply.
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"I am Marcus, a bold fighter," you reply.  "May I gain entrance to Metropolis?"
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The guard smiles, "oh, yes of course bold fighter," he and the other guard move to the side and let you enter the city-dome.
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The guard smiles. "Oh, yes, of course, bold fighter." He and the other guard move to the side and let you enter the city-dome.

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"I am Marcus, a bold fighter," you reply. "May I gain entrance to Metropolis?"

The guard smiles. "Oh, yes, of course, bold fighter." He and the other guard move to the side and let you enter the city-dome.


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