Flee out the nearest window

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You sneak quietly through the apartment to the window. The police keep pounding at the door. You slide the window open and step out onto the fire escape.   
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You sneak quietly through the apartment to the window. The police keep pounding at the door. You slide the window open and step out onto the fire escape.   
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"Hello, Mister."
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"Hello, mister."
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You look to the side. There's a girl with blonde pigtails sitting on the metal steps leading up to the next floor.
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You look to the side. There's a girl with blonde pigtails sitting on the metal steps leading up to the next floor.
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"Someone after you, Mister?" the girl asks.
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"Someone after you, mister?" the girl asks. "There's always someone chasing people out of the drug lady's apartment. I'll give you someplace to hide if you lemme have some of that candy you got rattling in your pockets."
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"Maybe there is," you say. "And if there is, getting caught chatting up a kid like you will only make things worse, so bye now."
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You pause. The pigtails make her look awfully young and her asking you for candy doesn't help. "How old are you?" you respond.
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"I'm not a ''kid''," the girl says. "I'm nineteen, even if I don't look it.  Chatting with me will make things better for you, not worse.  I know stuff.  There's always someone chasing people out of the drug lady's apartment.  I'll give you someplace to hide if you lemme have some of that candy you got rattling in your pockets."
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"19, mister," the girl says. "Are you coming or not?"
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Maybe she ''is'' a woman, not a girl.  The pigtails do make her look awfully young, and her asking you for candy doesn't help.
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Revision as of 16:57, 7 August 2020

You sneak quietly through the apartment to the window. The police keep pounding at the door. You slide the window open and step out onto the fire escape.

"Hello, mister."

You look to the side. There's a girl with blonde pigtails sitting on the metal steps leading up to the next floor.

"Someone after you, mister?" the girl asks. "There's always someone chasing people out of the drug lady's apartment. I'll give you someplace to hide if you lemme have some of that candy you got rattling in your pockets."

You pause. The pigtails make her look awfully young and her asking you for candy doesn't help. "How old are you?" you respond.

"19, mister," the girl says. "Are you coming or not?"

Do you:

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The Fire Escape Outside Nina's Apartment

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