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If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make. Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC) | If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make. Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC) | ||
| - | == | + | == Regarding [[Three Sisters: Remastered]]... == |
| - | That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed. | + | That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed... except for the current title page, which I created because the capitalization of the original title page was gnawing at my OCD. |
As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category. | As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category. | ||
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That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know! | That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know! | ||
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC) | --[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Just talked with Platypus. Apparently characters just need to be of age, not neccesarily look or act like it. | ||
| + | --[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 21:03, 16 June 2019 (UTC) | ||
Current revision as of 21:03, 16 June 2019
If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices must be choices your character can make. Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --Platypus 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
Regarding Three Sisters: Remastered...
That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story Three sisters. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed... except for the current title page, which I created because the capitalization of the original title page was gnawing at my OCD.
As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category.
The last thing I want to do is mess shit up without fully understanding everything I need to do in order to keep the story in tact, yet make sure it complies with the rules. I need to know what needs to be changed, where it needs to be changed, need to figure out how to change it etc... and thats a lot of work to try and do when your not even sure you have all the pages for the story in the same category.
That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know! --Durzan 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
Just talked with Platypus. Apparently characters just need to be of age, not neccesarily look or act like it. --Durzan 21:03, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
