Go out for a smoke

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You light a cigarette and take a walk.
You light a cigarette and take a walk.
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*Go back and [[listen to the family conversation]]
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There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.
There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.
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Stopping at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance. Then dip your head as you look at the clear water below.
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Pausing at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance.
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There were no fish nothing moving in the water and you could clearly see you own reflection.  
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Then look in the river the water was still with little movement visible like a mirror.
"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
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There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, the trees were in full blossom.
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"It is they bloomed early this year." Looking back, but no one was there
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[[Go to sleep to the next day for the Cremation Ceremony 2]]
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There stood a beautiful woman clad in a kimono her pearl white skin and lady like demeanor.
 
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Taking a look, it was true the sakura trees had blossomed.
 
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The streets by the river awash in the beautiful red and pink dyed leaves.
 
[[Category:After Dark (Hyaku-Monogatari) 100 Ghost stories]]
[[Category:After Dark (Hyaku-Monogatari) 100 Ghost stories]]

Current revision as of 23:29, 24 February 2012

You light a cigarette and take a walk.

edo_streets.jpg


There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.

Pausing at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance. Then look in the river the water was still with little movement visible like a mirror.

"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you. There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.

"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, the trees were in full blossom.

"It is they bloomed early this year." Looking back, but no one was there


Go to sleep to the next day for the Cremation Ceremony 2

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