Go out for a smoke

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Pausing at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance.
Pausing at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance.
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In the river the water was still, no single movement could be seen like a clear mirror.
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Then look in the river the water still with movement visible like a mirror.
"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
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There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.
There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.

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You light a cigarette and take a walk.

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There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.

Pausing at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance. Then look in the river the water still with movement visible like a mirror.

"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you. There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.

"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, the trees were in full blossom.

"It is they bloomed early this year." Looking back, but no one was there


The lights flicker and you go to sleep

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