| - | in a slight whpeisr. Nobody answered me. My imagination must’ve gotten the best of me. I started to roam the damp, dark circle again. Then I felt a cold fabric press up against my lips. I pushed and screamed, but not in time.Heres another part same story diff part:“You take her Jack! You promised! You come up here you take her! It’s so easy you sleep right next to her! When she falls asleep take her out the window. My car will be right below it. We can load her in there and take her to the spot,” Tyler was panicked and frustrated.“No! Absolutely not! I am not taking her to your car. You take her. I can meet you guys there. Or better yet how about we forget about this whole thing? Hm?” Jack sounded upset and stressed.“No we are not forgetting about this. That baby can’t live. Jessica can’t either. We do what we have to. We are getting paid a thousand dollars to get rid of that girl and an extra five hundred to get rid of that baby. I say it’s a good deal. No one would suspect us. You do have your alibi set right?”“Who gave us this deal? Yes, I do.”“They were both anonymous. I do not know how they found me or you but they did and that is all that matters. What is your alibi?”“I was with my grandfather for spring break. I already told him to tell people I was there and I already told people I was there. What’s your alibi if you are so obsessed about this?”“Me? Well I’m in Florida with my wife if anyone asks. Have been for two years, never left that state.”“When? Where? How?”“When; May fifth at twelve midnight. This gives us a month to prepare. Where; a house in Nevada. You can’t miss it. Huge cream colored Victorian. There is a hole by the side of his house we go in there. How; we bring her there. Wait for her to wake up and then attack. I am going to sneak up behind her and press chloroform against her face. We will drag her farther into the circle. A little cot is there with a small window. We will bring her small portions of food for one week, with water of course. Torture is the key. Then after that week is over I will seduce her, act like I found her and I care then you and I both kill her.”Another story:I bent down and picked up the porcelain doll from the wooden floors. Her face was cracked, as much as mine seemed to be now. I've gotten pretty use to daddy hitting me when he came back from work as he liked to call it. However mama and I both knew he went out drinking with his buddies.Mama, oh it's my fault you died. If I had only been braver and taken my punishment as a good girl is supposed to do. No, I didnt, I was a coward I went and hid. Or:It was six in the morning; I was sitting in the freezing cold shower scrubbing my body as hard as was possible to get the pungent smell of the father off of me. When I was somewhat decent I got out of the shower and looked in the mirror. A black bruise swelled around my eye. I put my hand near it then jerked back. The pain was intolerable. I proceeded to put my clothes back on, makeup on, and straighten my hair. I opened the bathroom door and went to school.“Where are you going?”His voice stopped me dead in my tracks. I turned quickly on my heels and smiled.“School, it’s time for school,” I spun back around and started walking.I felt a firm grip on my shoulder. He pulled him self closer to me. My father stood behind me. Pushing against me, he was breathing in my ear and twirling my hiar.“I’m gonna be late.”I felt him turn me. He smiled in my face and before I knew it his lips were against mine.Honest opinion. Constructive criticism please(:. Which one do you think iwhich on do you think is best?* sorry i couldnt type it all. ahaha
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