User talk:Zenclair

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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 01:56, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, my earlier...passive-aggressive post was not polite. I apologize. Your story is your story, and I have no right to judge. I have removed the...picture, but if for some reason you really like it, I just commented it out, so you can still copy the code for it by hitting edit and copying all the stuff with <div +. --Dirty Me 02:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Have you noticed that your story is titled 'Harbinger of Lust'? I hope you've noticed, since you started it and you titled it that. The category on each page of your story should therefore be 'Harbinger of Lust', not 'In fellheim', which I'm guessing is the character's current location. --Platypus 15:33, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I notice on many of your pages, you are misspelling alot of words. Some are just wrong spelling, some are completely different words.

I understand if you are not a native English speaker it can be rather frustrating to try to get grammar right. If I can make a recommendation.

Normally, I type all my stuff in a word document, then run a spelling and grammar check. Then I can copy and paste it into the story. I do this because my spelling can be pretty bad too...

It is just something that you may want to think about, since too many spelling and grammar errors makes your story...annoying...to try to read. It is not your fault, just saying it may be a way you can try to fix it. --Dirty Me 02:23, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for the tip, when I have access to a computer I'll revise my work, but until then I just need to get the essence of it into writing.