User talk:GilboBaggins

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, please try to punctuate correctly. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.

You might also want to consider avoiding the phrases began to and start to. These are good phrases to use to indicate continuous action such as it began to rain. Most of the time, these just bog down action that should happen, not begin to happen. Do not begin to start to do something. Do it! --Platypus 01:48, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I've written the majority of Smutty Sex Romp, but there are/have been numerous other regular and semi-regular contributors, such as Anedwcan and Teejay (who contributes to practically every story on the site). Unfortunately, SSR also attracts a lot of writers with zero grasp of grammar or punctuation, and I have to delete their scribble entirely. --Platypus 02:59, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

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